Score: 8

"Something to think about..."

submission: Shut Up, Cup! Ep. 6

date: December 10, 2008

This Animation could be a lot funnier- but the trouble is making a comedy that caters to younger viewers as well as teens and the twentysomethings that watch this on newgrounds. I helped write this, and did some of the animation- sure we could add swearing and violence.. which would make it much more appealing- but Brent's 6 year old little brother who LOVES the shorts would probably be disappointed. As well as our parents and grandparents who watch this. Think of our target audience, then you might be a little more willing to get the jokes.

- Jake

Score: 10

"It was really a 9/10"

submission: N.G. Showdown

date: May 6, 2008

But you got bonus points for getting it in early. Great job, good luck, I hope you win!

Score: 9

"for some odd reason"

submission: the Boy... "Sandstorm"

date: October 9, 2007

I'm terrified to blink now. good job? :P

Score: 10

"Haha"

submission: Superhouse and Bob

date: September 26, 2007

That was great. I love when authors pull first person omniscient narration. "There is no such thing as superhouse!" (x3)

Score: 10

"I love..."

submission: TANKMEN 2

date: September 26, 2007

your style, your writing, and your voice acting. the audio problems weren't even that noticeable. we all know flash is a bitch when it comes to audio. Great job. I love the tankmen series. totally buying a shirt. also... COCK JOKE! K bye.

Score: 10

"Great Job"

submission: Happiness Apotheosis

date: September 23, 2007

There is nothing I didn't like about it. Keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"Gah-lori-ous!"

submission: Madness: Deus Ex Machina

date: September 23, 2007

I can't find the button to give this 100 stars, so I guess I'll just give it 10/10. Loved every second. Period. How long did this take you? I'd love to know.

Score: 10

"All my 5's"

submission: Tom Fulp likes JT

date: September 19, 2007

Are belong to this. Most original thing i've seen on newgrounds in.. at least a week. lol.

Score: 10

"Ga-lori-ous!"

submission: Metropolis Circuit

date: September 10, 2007

If i had to crit you on anything, it would be the sound effect the buttons made on the menu, everything else... AMAZING. Wow. just wow. Keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: On Your Mark pt.1

date: April 5, 2007

Wow, everything in this flash is outstanding. How long did this take you? Simply, amazing.