Something to think about...
This Animation could be a lot funnier- but the trouble is making a comedy that caters to younger viewers as well as teens and the twentysomethings that watch this on newgrounds. I helped write this, and did some of the animation- sure we could add swearing and violence.. which would make it much more appealing- but Brent's 6 year old little brother who LOVES the shorts would probably be disappointed. As well as our parents and grandparents who watch this. Think of our target audience, then you might be a little more willing to get the jokes.
It was really a 9/10
But you got bonus points for getting it in early. Great job, good luck, I hope you win!
for some odd reason
I'm terrified to blink now. good job? :P
Either add a health bar, or have the enemies stay out a little longer before they attack. The art could use a little work but it works. Nice try. Very Bloody.
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